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The table below shows population figures for four countries for 2003 and projected figure for 2025 and 2050. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below shows population figures for four countries for 2003 and projected figure for 2025 and 2050. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The chart depicts the volume of citizens for 2003 and estimated figures for various nations like Argentina,
Indonesia
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, Italy and the
Republic
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 of
Korea
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.
Overall
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,
it is clear that
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Indonesia
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 has the highest number of citizens with the most number of increment in decades.
Therefore
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, the
Republic
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 of
Korea
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 and Argentina had steady growth.
In contrast
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, Italy had a gradual fall in population throughout the time.
To begin
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 with, in 2003 and 2005
Indonesia
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's citizenship was 238,274 and in 2050 it stands at 312 (million) respectively.
Additionally
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, Argentina was standing in the least populated nation in 2003,
however
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,
according to
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 assumptions by 2050 it will be the highest-resident country with a soar of 28 and holding 62 ( million) residents, after
Indonesia
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.
In addition
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, Italy and the
Republic
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 of
Korea
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 had similar ratios throughout the time period. In 2003 there were citizens just above a half and the
Republic
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 of
Korea
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 with just below a half.
According to
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 the assumption, both nations will continue following the same trend till 2050.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "according to".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words indonesia, republic, korea with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "stands" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • projected figures
  • population growth
  • decline
  • initial population
  • highlight
  • differences
  • compare
  • expected changes
  • significant increases
  • significant decreases
  • entire period
  • contributing factors
  • birth rates
  • immigration
  • economic conditions
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