The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019. Summarise the information by selectiong and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The first line chart gives information about the proportion of
households
that had electrical appliances (washing Use synonyms
machine
, Fix the agreement mistake
machines
refrigerator
, and vacuum Fix the agreement mistake
refrigerators
cleaner
) in their house, Fix the agreement mistake
cleaners
whereas
the second chart illustrates Linking Words
of
how many Change preposition
apply
hours
those Use synonyms
devices
were used during housework per Use synonyms
week
between 1920 Use synonyms
to
2019.
Correct word choice
and
Overall
, the Linking Words
number
of electrical appliances owned by Use synonyms
households
in a particular country rose for almost a hundred years. Use synonyms
However
, the increasing Linking Words
number
of the ownership was not followed by the weekly time spent which fell gradually since 1960.
In the beginning, the Use synonyms
Use synonyms
households
ownership of washing Change noun form
household's
households'
machine
and vacuum Fix the agreement mistake
machines
cleaner
had the highest proportion, which stood at 40% and 30%, respectively. The proportion for both Fix the agreement mistake
cleaners
devices
Use synonyms
then
grew significantly and reached the same point at 70% in 1960. Linking Words
While
washing machines owned by Linking Words
households
continued to rise gradually until 2019 at around 72%, the ownership of vacuum cleaners skyrocketed and reached a peak at 100% in 2000 and remained steady until 2019. Use synonyms
On the other hand
, only a few Linking Words
households
owned a refrigerator in 1920, standing at below 10%. Use synonyms
However
, the Linking Words
number
grew significantly Use synonyms
for
90% in 1960 followed by a moderate increase Change preposition
to
at
100% in 2019.
Change preposition
to
In contrast
with the possession of electrical Linking Words
devices
that witnessed Use synonyms
a
growth, the Correct article usage
apply
number
of Use synonyms
hours
spent Use synonyms
for
each appliance dropped over decades. In 1920, electrical Change preposition
on
Use synonyms
devices
usage per household started at 50 Change the noun form
device
hours
per Use synonyms
week
. The Use synonyms
number
Use synonyms
then
experienced a significant fall to 20 Linking Words
hours
per Use synonyms
week
in 1960, before dropping steadily to just above 10 Use synonyms
hours
per Use synonyms
week
per household in the final year.Use synonyms
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Vocabulary: Replace the words households, hours, devices, week, number with synonyms.
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