The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019. Summarise the information by selectiong and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The first line chart gives information about the proportion of
households
that had electrical appliances (washing machine
, Fix the agreement mistake
machines
refrigerator
, and vacuum Fix the agreement mistake
refrigerators
cleaner
) in their house, Fix the agreement mistake
cleaners
whereas
the second chart illustrates of
how many Change preposition
apply
hours
those devices
were used during housework per week
between 1920 to
2019.
Correct word choice
and
Overall
, the number
of electrical appliances owned by households
in a particular country rose for almost a hundred years. However
, the increasing number
of the ownership was not followed by the weekly time spent which fell gradually since 1960.
In the beginning, the households
ownership of washing Change noun form
household's
households'
machine
and vacuum Fix the agreement mistake
machines
cleaner
had the highest proportion, which stood at 40% and 30%, respectively. The proportion for both Fix the agreement mistake
cleaners
devices
then
grew significantly and reached the same point at 70% in 1960. While
washing machines owned by households
continued to rise gradually until 2019 at around 72%, the ownership of vacuum cleaners skyrocketed and reached a peak at 100% in 2000 and remained steady until 2019. On the other hand
, only a few households
owned a refrigerator in 1920, standing at below 10%. However
, the number
grew significantly for
90% in 1960 followed by a moderate increase Change preposition
to
at
100% in 2019.
Change preposition
to
In contrast
with the possession of electrical devices
that witnessed a
growth, the Correct article usage
apply
number
of hours
spent for
each appliance dropped over decades. In 1920, electrical Change preposition
on
devices
usage per household started at 50 Change the noun form
device
hours
per week
. The number
then
experienced a significant fall to 20 hours
per week
in 1960, before dropping steadily to just above 10 hours
per week
per household in the final year.Submitted by averinasandra on
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