The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019. Summarise the information by selectiong and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019. 

Summarise the information by selectiong and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The first line chart gives information about the proportion of
households
that had electrical appliances (washing
machine
Fix the agreement mistake
machines
show examples
,
refrigerator
Fix the agreement mistake
refrigerators
show examples
, and vacuum
cleaner
Fix the agreement mistake
cleaners
show examples
) in their house,
whereas
the second chart illustrates
of
Change preposition
apply
show examples
how many
hours
those
devices
were used during housework per
week
between 1920
to
Correct word choice
and
show examples
2019.
Overall
, the
number
of electrical appliances owned by
households
in a particular country rose for almost a hundred years.
However
, the increasing
number
of the ownership was not followed by the weekly time spent which fell gradually since 1960. In the beginning, the
households
Change noun form
household's
households'
show examples
ownership of washing
machine
Fix the agreement mistake
machines
show examples
and vacuum
cleaner
Fix the agreement mistake
cleaners
show examples
had the highest proportion, which stood at 40% and 30%, respectively. The proportion for both
devices
then
grew significantly and reached the same point at 70% in 1960.
While
washing machines owned by
households
continued to rise gradually until 2019 at around 72%, the ownership of vacuum cleaners skyrocketed and reached a peak at 100% in 2000 and remained steady until 2019.
On the other hand
, only a few
households
owned a refrigerator in 1920, standing at below 10%.
However
, the
number
grew significantly
for
Change preposition
to
show examples
90% in 1960 followed by a moderate increase
at
Change preposition
to
show examples
100% in 2019.
In contrast
with the possession of electrical
devices
that witnessed
a
Correct article usage
apply
show examples
growth, the
number
of
hours
spent
for
Change preposition
on
show examples
each appliance dropped over decades. In 1920, electrical
devices
Change the noun form
device
show examples
usage per household started at 50
hours
per
week
. The
number
then
experienced a significant fall to 20
hours
per
week
in 1960, before dropping steadily to just above 10
hours
per
week
per household in the final year.
Submitted by averinasandra on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however".
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words households, hours, devices, week, number with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "fell" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "stood" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "gradually" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "significantly" was used 3 times.
What to do next:
Look at other essays: