The graph below gives information on the numbers of participants for different activities at one social centre in Melbourne, Australia for the period 2000 to 2020. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The graph illustrates the
amount
of people joining various activities at a social centre in Melbourne, Australia between the year Change the quantifier
number
of
2000 and 2020. Change preposition
apply
Overall
, while
most of the activities maintained an upward trend and film
club led in the trend, Correct article usage
the film
the
amateur dramatics is the only activity that showed a decline.
It is noticed that the number of participants Correct article usage
apply
Correct pronoun usage
who takes
takes
part in the film club activity Correct subject-verb agreement
take
maintain
the highest proportion. 65 people joined it in 2000. Despite the fact that it faced a Correct subject-verb agreement
maintains
slightly
drop, which remained 60 participants in 2010, it rose to about 66 by 2020 eventually.Change the adverb
slight
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