The following graphs give information about the Gross Domestic Product (GDP) and employment sectors of adeveloping country. Write a report for a university Lecturer describing the information shown below
The table depicts the
sector
-wise distribution of employment and GDP
(Gross Domestic Product) in various sectors
of a developing country in 1992, whereas
the line graph shows the contribution to GDP
from these sectors
from 1986 to 1995.
Overall
, the natural resources
sector
generated the highest number of jobs among all sectors
in 1992, but the service sector
contributed the most to GDP
that year. The services sector
continued to be the highest contributor
to GDP
between 1986 and 1995.
In 1992, the service sector
, consisting of three broad categories, accounted for nearly 60% of the overall
GDP
, making it the highest contributor
despite the transport and communication category generating the least amount of jobs (only 1.6%) among any sector
. The next biggest contributor
was the natural resources
sector
, accounting for a fifth of the overall
GDP
while
generating almost four-fifths of the jobs. The industry and other sectors
had approximately the same employment figures (3.6% vs. 3.8%); however
, the other sector
had no contribution to GDP
.
From 1986 to 1995, the service sector
experienced a gradual decline in the percentage of GDP
, starting at around 65% in 1986 and dropping to nearly half of the total share in 1995, despite being the dominant contributor
among the sectors
. Natural resources
followed a similar downward trend, decreasing from just under 30% in 1986 to just over 10% in 1995. The industry sector
, despite starting out with the lowest figures of around 10% in 1986, increased steadily over the years, overtaking natural resources
in the '94s and ending the period with just over 20%Submitted by man3meet4 on
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