The chart below shows the proportion of male and female students studying six art-related subjects at a UK university in 2011. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the proportion of male and female students studying six art-related subjects at a UK university in 2011. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart provides information on the percentage of male and female
students
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studying six different
art
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-related
subjects
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at a UK university in 2011. The
subjects
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include Linguistics, English Language, Philosophy, History,
Art
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and
Design
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, and Communication. A key observation is that female
students
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outnumber males in most
subjects
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except for
Art
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and
Design
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. In Linguistics, there is a significant difference, with about 60% of the
students
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being female compared to approximately 40% male. A similar pattern is seen in
English
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Language, where female
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represent around 55%, slightly higher than the male percentage of 45%. In Philosophy, males lead slightly, making up 55% of the student population,
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females account for 45%. In History, both genders are almost equally represented, with a slight majority of male
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. The only subject where male
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dominate is
Art
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and
Design
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, with about 60% male participation compared to 40% female. In Communication, the numbers are closer, with both genders contributing
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, but females have a slight lead. In summary, the chart demonstrates that
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female
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tend to
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subjects
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like Linguistics and English Language, males dominate in
Art
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and
Design
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, with both genders showing balanced participation in History and Communication.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 73%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words students, subjects, art, design with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "represent" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 4 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • proportion
  • art-related subjects
  • gender distribution
  • predominate
  • significant
  • gender imbalances
  • percentages
  • comparison
  • balanced distribution
  • data
  • figures
  • trends
  • popular
  • least popular
  • subject choices
  • analyze
  • overview
  • summarize
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