The diagram below shows how one type of coal is used to produce electricity. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The process diagram includes various steps
while
producing current from the coal.
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Overall
, there are ten steps involved in order to generate Linking Words
electricity
from the coal. The first step began with extracting coal from the mining. Use synonyms
In contrast
, the final step involved is supplying Linking Words
electricity
from Use synonyms
gas
Use synonyms
power
plants to factories and Use synonyms
power
stations.
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Initially
, coals are extracted through mining in order to place them on a trolley. After the coals are placed in a trolley they are loaded in containers in order to transport them into a gasifier to manufacture gases. Linking Words
Similarly
, the Linking Words
gas
produced is transferred into cooling where unnecessary heats are left out.
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On the other hand
, after the Linking Words
gas
is cooled down they are taken into a cleaning machine. Use synonyms
Likewise
, after they are cleaned the gasoline Linking Words
are
Correct subject-verb agreement
is
then
shifted to a Linking Words
gas
Use synonyms
power
plant where Use synonyms
electricity
is produced. Use synonyms
In addition
, the waste heats are Linking Words
also
removed from the Linking Words
power
plant. In the end, the Use synonyms
electricity
is produced and supplied to big industries and Use synonyms
power
stations to supply Use synonyms
electricity
.Use synonyms
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