The diagram below shows how one type of coal is used to produce electricity. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
The process diagram includes various steps
while
producing current from the coal.
Overall
, there are ten steps involved in order to generate electricity
from the coal. The first step began with extracting coal from the mining. In contrast
, the final step involved is supplying electricity
from gas
power
plants to factories and power
stations.
Initially
, coals are extracted through mining in order to place them on a trolley. After the coals are placed in a trolley they are loaded in containers in order to transport them into a gasifier to manufacture gases. Similarly
, the gas
produced is transferred into cooling where unnecessary heats are left out.
On the other hand
, after the gas
is cooled down they are taken into a cleaning machine. Likewise
, after they are cleaned the gasoline are
Correct subject-verb agreement
is
then
shifted to a gas
power
plant where electricity
is produced. In addition
, the waste heats are also
removed from the power
plant. In the end, the electricity
is produced and supplied to big industries and power
stations to supply electricity
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