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The pie chart below shows the main reasons why students chose to study at a particular UK university in 1987 and 2007. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make a comparison where relevant.

The pie chart below shows the main reasons why students chose to study at a particular UK university in 1987 and 2007. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make a comparison where relevant.
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The supplied pie charts indicate why scholars
intented
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study
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 at an exclusive
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 in the United Kingdom over a twenty-year period. A glance at the graph reveals that the highest proportion of
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 for choosing to
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 at a
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 was suitable degree
couruses
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courses
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UK
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, the lowest amount of main
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 was good sports and social activities over the period. In 2007, the percentage of learners who preferred to
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 a unique
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 for suitable degree
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courses
 was nearly a third (37%) in England, (which was the highest amount of major
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 over the whole year) just ahead of 1987 with the same reason at 35% in the
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, 10% of students determined to
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 in England in 1987 which was roughly half of the 2007 at 22% in the United Kingdom.
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, only a fraction of students (6%) decided to
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 at a particular
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 for good sports and social activities in the
UK
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 in 2007. (which was the lowest proportion of
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 for studying over the period).
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, the proportion of main
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 for choosing to
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 at a special
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 for quality of
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resources
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 in the
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 in 1987 was a bit the same as in 2007 at 21% and 17%, respectively.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words study, university, reasons, uk with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 3 times.
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