The maps below show an industrial area in the town of norbiton, and planned future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.
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There is a river
seperating
the current Norbiton Correct your spelling
separating
insutrial
Correct your spelling
industrial
area
and the planned future development
area
where
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which
it
is filled with factory buildings. Correct pronoun usage
apply
According to
the plan, a bridge will be built from the current farmland across the river to the development
area
right
next to the town. Then
, a road
will be built to the center
of the Change the spelling
centre
development
area
which will then
be surrounded by housings
, shops and a medical Fix the agreement mistake
housing
centre
. To the futher
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further
right
of the medical centre
, at the end
of the road
, will be the future school building. In between of
the medical Change preposition
apply
centre
and the school, to the front right
of the school, will be a playground where there will be a couple of housing beside its entrance. The development
area
centre
will have four road
exits, the medical centre
is located bottom
right
, between the right
and bottom
exit
road
. Meanwhile, the shops will be located between the left and bottom
exit
roads. The left exit
road
will end on a housing area
which extends to before the primary north exit
road
. The bottom
exit
road
will lead to a roundabout which joins into the main road
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