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The maps below show an industrial area in the town of norbiton, and planned future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.

The maps below show an industrial area in the town of norbiton, and planned future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.
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There is a river
seperating
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separating
 the current Norbiton
insutrial
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industrial
area
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 and the planned future
development
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area
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where
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it
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is filled with factory buildings.
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 the plan, a bridge will be built from the current farmland across the river to the
development
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area
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right
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 next to the town.
Then
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, a
road
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 will be built to the
center
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 of the
development
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area
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 which will
then
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 be surrounded by
housings
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housing
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, shops and a medical
centre
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. To the
futher
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further
right
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 of the medical
centre
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,
at the end
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 of the
road
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, will be the future school building. In between
of
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the medical
centre
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 and the school, to the front
right
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 of the school, will be a playground where there will be a couple of housing beside its entrance. The
development
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area
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centre
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 will have four
road
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 exits, the medical
centre
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 is located
bottom
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right
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 , between the
right
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 and
bottom
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exit
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road
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. Meanwhile, the shops will be located between the left and
bottom
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exit
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 roads. The left
exit
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road
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 will end on a housing
area
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 which extends to before the primary north
exit
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road
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. The
bottom
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exit
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road
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 will lead to a roundabout which joins into the main
road
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