The table shows how the UK unemployment spent their time last year.
The table shows how
men
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women
who were out of work Use synonyms
last
year spent their time. The information is broken down into parts of the day and fourteen different Linking Words
activities
, First of Use synonyms
allit
is interesting to note that the majority of both Correct your spelling
all it
all
men
and Use synonyms
women
who are unemployed are engaged in productive Use synonyms
activities
in the morning with 61% of Use synonyms
men
and 91% of Use synonyms
women
either shopping. trying to secure employment or Use synonyms
doing
housework, with Wrong verb form
do
women
being twice as likely to do the latter in the afternoon. Use synonyms
However
, figures for the afternoon show that the unemployed devote more time to leisure Linking Words
activities
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such
as watching television, visiting friends or reading.
When looking at differences between genders it seems that Linking Words
men
were more likely to be engaged Use synonyms
with
home improvement, gardening or active pursuits Change preposition
in
such
as walking or taking part in sports. More sedentary Linking Words
activities
Use synonyms
such
as staying in bed or sitting around were similar for both sexes. Twice the number of Linking Words
men
than Use synonyms
women
spent their time drinking but Use synonyms
this
still only accounted for a very small proportion.
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Overall
, it appears that contrary to many stereotypical preconceptions of the unemployed boüi Linking Words
men
and Use synonyms
women
do spend a proportion of each day on productive tasks with Use synonyms
their
being some Interesting differences between genders.Correct your spelling
there
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