he maps below show the village of Stokeford in 1930 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The maps illustrate the developments which took place in the village of Shakeleford between 1930 and 2010.
Overall
, a comparison of the two maps reveals a complete transformation from a huge vical
area to Correct your spelling
vocal
mainly
urban area."
In the year 1930, there Correct article usage
a mainly
were
a lot of farmland and shops in the town, Correct subject-verb agreement
was
after
80 years the town saw a number of a lot changes. One of the Correct word choice
but after
most
changes Correct word choice
biggest
is they knocked
down the farmland from the east of the river stroke to build Change the verb form
has they knocked
I
make Correct pronoun usage
apply
away
for Correct your spelling
way
residential
area. Add an article
a residential
the residential
Moreover
a new junction was built by Add a comma
Moreover,
demolished
the shops and during Wrong verb form
demolishing
this
time the post office still
there in the same place.
Add a missing verb
is still
In contrast
, the primary school in the north, the
retirement home still remained, but Correct word choice
and the
them
Change the pronoun
they
make
it bigger after a few Wrong verb form
made
of
houses around it. After the garden they used to the road they make it small and replaced it Change preposition
apply
by
a lot of houses and Change preposition
with
make
a junction to the retirement home Wrong verb form
made
also
they make it bigger than before.Submitted by s_syedy on
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