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The chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar graph illustrates the proportion of rental and owned residences in England and Wales in 70 years from 1950 to 2020.
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, the proportionality of owned lodging almost doubled over the seven decades
while
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 the average of rental housing declined significantly over seven years time. Starting from almost 32
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cent, the owned housing kept increasing continuously till 2000 to the peak of almost 70% followed by a slight decline at the beginning of the 21st Century to approximately 62%. In 1950, rental homes were at
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 of less than 70% followed by an uninterrupted decline to nearly 30% by 2000. The next twenty years witnessed a slight growth falling a bit short of 40%.

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: The word "declined" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "slight" was used 2 times.
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