The pie chart gives information on UAE government spending in 2000. The total budget was AED 315 billion. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The pie chart gives information on UAE government spending in 2000. The total budget was AED 315 billion.

 

 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie chart illustrates the figure of budget
on
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UAE government
consuming
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consumption
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in 2000.
Overall
, it can be clearly seen that had the highest
consume
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consumption
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.
However
, transport was seen as the lowest figure. Observing the chart in more detail, social security had the largest
number
of
consuming
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with 100
billion
. Health and personal social were the second roughly 53.The
number
of education was double the
number
of law accounting for about 17 and nearly 38 respectively.
In contrast
, the amount in housing
herritage
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heritage
and environment
were
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almost 15
billion
which
were
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fewer
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than the
number
of other
expenditure
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expenditures
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with
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23
billion
. One striking piece of information to be noticed
that
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both other expenditure and debit
internent
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internet
had an equal amount of around 23
billion
.
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