The table below shows the amount spent on healthcare in different countries. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.

The table below shows the amount spent on healthcare in different countries. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.
The given diagram demonstrates the process of generating
electricity
in a hydroelectric power station.
Overall
, it involves six cycling stages to generate
electricity
that works from day to night. The initial step begins with river
water
flowing into a high-level
reservoir
. The
water
in the
reservoir
is closed by a dam managing the
water
intake. During the day the dam is opened for the
water
intake and the
water
is flowed
Change to the active voice
flows
has flowed
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to produce
electricity
. Once the
water
went
Wrong verb form
goes
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inside
power
Correct article usage
the power
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station where the reversible turbines
is
Change the verb form
are
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operating the generator to process the
water
into power lines and
going
Wrong verb form
go
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to the national grid to provide
electricity
for buildings.
Then
, at night the residual
water
from the
day
Change noun form
day's
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activity is placed
Change preposition
in at
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at
Correct your spelling
a
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low-level
reservoir
. The
water
is being pumped by reversible turbines into
high-level
Add an article
the high-level
a high-level
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reservoir
. Once the
water
is flowed into the high-level
reservoir
, the dam is closed.
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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Replace the words electricity, water, reservoir with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Healthcare expenditure
  • Gross Domestic Product (GDP)
  • Per capita spending
  • Healthcare allocation
  • Healthcare budget
  • Public healthcare funding
  • Private healthcare expenditure
  • Healthcare system efficiency
  • Expenditure patterns
  • Spending trends
  • Comparative analysis
  • Economic indicators
  • Benchmark spending levels
  • Policy-driven healthcare spending
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