The table below shows the amount spent on healthcare in different countries. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.
The given diagram demonstrates the process of generating
electricity
in a hydroelectric power station. Use synonyms
Overall
, it involves six cycling stages to generate Linking Words
electricity
that works from day to night.
The initial step begins with river Use synonyms
water
flowing into a high-level Use synonyms
reservoir
. The Use synonyms
water
in the Use synonyms
reservoir
is closed by a dam managing the Use synonyms
water
intake. During the day the dam is opened for the Use synonyms
water
intake and the Use synonyms
water
Use synonyms
is flowed
to produce Change to the active voice
flows
has flowed
electricity
. Once the Use synonyms
water
Use synonyms
went
inside Wrong verb form
goes
power
station where the reversible turbines Correct article usage
the power
is
operating the generator to process the Change the verb form
are
water
into power lines and Use synonyms
going
to the national grid to provide Wrong verb form
go
electricity
for buildings.
Use synonyms
Then
, at night the residual Linking Words
water
from the Use synonyms
day
activity is placed Change noun form
day's
Change preposition
in at
at
low-level Correct your spelling
a
reservoir
. The Use synonyms
water
is being pumped by reversible turbines into Use synonyms
high-level
Add an article
the high-level
a high-level
reservoir
. Once the Use synonyms
water
is flowed into the high-level Use synonyms
reservoir
, the dam is closed.Use synonyms
Submitted by salsabunga on
Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
Introduction: The introduction is missing.
▼
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
▼
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
▼
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
▼
Vocabulary: Replace the words electricity, water, reservoir with synonyms.
▼
Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
▼
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
▼