A family member is coming to stay with you. He/she will be arriving by train in the morning, but you won’t be home until the evening. Write a letter to your relative. In your letter: explain arrangements you have made for them to have keys and get into the house tell your relative how to get from the train station to your house say when you will be home and suggest what you could do together that evening You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear… Write at least 150 words.

Dear Uncle, I hope

this

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letter finds you well. I am very excited by the news that you are coming to stay with me at my

home

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, but

due to

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some

unforseen cirumstances

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unforeseen circumstances

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would

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will

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not

able

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be able

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recieve

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receive

you at the train station in the morning. Hosting you at my house would mean a world to me, but my friend's mom got

hosptialised

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hospitalised

hospitalized

yesterday and

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need to see her

tommorow

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tomorrow

morning at

Abdreen

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Aberdeen

Hospital. So, it will not be possible for me to welcome you at

home

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in the morning, but

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have asked my tenants to unlock the house for you in my absence. He will soon contact you and will share his contact details as per my instructions. It is very

convinient

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convenient

to reach my

home

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. There are two green line buses available which will depart from the station at around 7 a.m. in the morning

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apply

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and will drop you at

home

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in 17 minutes. The bus numbers are 11 and 12. You can

also

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use Google Maps for more public transport options to reach

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apply

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my house. I promise that

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will not let you wait longer, as

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will be back by afternoon.

Meanwhile

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Meanwhile,

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you can take

shower

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a shower

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and have some snacks, which you can find at

dining

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the dining

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table. And you will be very happy to know that I have already booked our favourite

resturant

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restaurant

for the evening where we will have dinner together. I am looking forward to meeting you soon. Yours lovingly, Abc

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Oct 7, 2024

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Task Achievement

Check for minor spelling and grammar errors to improve clarity.

Coherence and Cohesion

Make sure each paragraph follows a clear topic and supports the main idea.

Task Achievement

Clear and polite tone suited for a letter to a family member.

Coherence and Cohesion

Effective use of paragraphs to organize information.

Coherence and Cohesion

Logical flow and smooth transitions between ideas.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

252 words

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