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The chart shows requests for in formations at a tourist office in the United Kingdom from januari to June. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.

The chart shows requests for in formations at a tourist office in the United Kingdom from januari to June. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.
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The line graph illustrates the
number
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 of four kinds of
people
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 who asked for information at a tourist office in the UK in the period of January to June. The way
people
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 used to require details increased most steadily was in person, which used to be the least way
people
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 preferred in January, but the
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 of it surged dramatically and eventually topped after April. The
number
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 of individuals who got information by telephone saw a fluctuation between January and March and remained
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 same level in March,
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, it jumped since April and stayed in second place afterwards. The population of using letters or email to send requests for more messages decreased from the beginning of the year and stayed unchanged,
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became
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 the least from March to June. In summary, there was an increasing trend in
people
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 who went to the office directly and those who required by telephone
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 the
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 of
people
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 who sent letters or emails declined. Most of the
people
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 went to the tourist offices by person to make requests for pieces of information,
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, there were few
people
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 who chose the use of letters and email.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, people with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "information" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "stayed" was used 2 times.
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