The graph below shows the population of India and China from the year 2000 to the present day with projections for growth to the year 2050. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The graph gives information about the populace growth of two different countries from the year 2000 with predicted changes to 2025.
In 2000, India's
population
started at just one million in the first apply period, even so, this
number increased rapidly to over 1.4 billion
by 2030. The data indicate it will continue its upward surge, until
to around 1.6 Change preposition
apply
billion
by 2050.
On the other hand
, although
at the beginning of period
, Add an article
the period
cina
has Correct your spelling
China
1.25
Correct article usage
a 1.25
billion
population
, apply this
number rose steadily to under 1.5 billion
by 2030. However
, it experienced decrease
of just close to 1.4 Add an article
a decrease
billion
in the last
decades.
Overall
, the major difference between the two population
trends is that the number of people in
China is forecast to start falling after 2030 whereas
the population
of India will continue to soar.Submitted by millionmiles.indonesia on
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