The graph shows the amount earned by graduates of different age groups in 2002. It includes those with a degree, those with a higher degree (postgraduate) and those with other qualifications. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

This

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graph shows the weekly earnings of full-time graduate employees by type of

degree

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and age in 2002. If we look at the details, the weekly pay for all three groups goes up a lot when the workers are young.

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, people with a higher

degree

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start at ages 21–25

making

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390

pounds

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a week, and their pay goes up until it reaches a top peak of 750

pounds

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between the ages of 41 and 45. At the same time, workers with a first

degree

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start at the lowest point of 350

pounds

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a week, and they reach their highest pay of 700

pounds

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earlier, between the ages of 36 and 40. It is interesting that the "others" group starts with the highest pay at 420

pounds

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a week, and they

also

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have the fastest growth, reaching the highest point on the whole chart at 820

pounds

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when they are 36 to 40 years old. After these high points, the pay for the first

degree

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and

others

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other

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groups starts to go down,

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the pay for the higher

degree

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group stays mostly the same before dropping at the very end.

Overall

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,the weekly pay for all three groups goes up

while

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they are young,

later

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but later

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the number decreases as they age.