The graph shows the amount earned by graduates of different age groups in 2002. It includes those with a degree, those with a higher degree (postgraduate) and those with other qualifications. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The graph shows the amount earned by graduates of different age groups in 2002. It includes those with a degree, those with a higher degree (postgraduate) and those with other qualifications. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 

Write at least 150 words.
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The graph illustrates the
earnings
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obtained by
degree
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holders
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of three contrasting educational levels in 2002.
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, during 2002, the incomes of those with
first
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and other
degrees
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decreased with increasing age,
while
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higher
degree
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incomes were moderately rising. At
ages
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from
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21 to 25, those with
first
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degrees
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had the lowest
earnings
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. Those with other types of
degrees
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had the greatest gains,
whereas
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postgraduate
earnings
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were gradually increasing. The
first
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major feature is that the
earnings
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of
other type
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of
degree
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holders
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increased dramatically to about 810 at an average age of 36 to 40, but
then
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unexpectedly dropped to about 730 between the
ages
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of 46 and 55 as age increased, and
then
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gradually decreased to 690 between the
ages
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of 56 and 60.
On the other hand
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,
holders
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of higher
degrees
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grew from about 380 to approximately 780 between the
ages
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of 55 and 56.
Likewise
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, the
holders
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of the
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first
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degree
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earnings
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climbed from 350 to 690 and
then
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remained stable at
ages
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36–41,
then
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dropped to around 670, and
then
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slowly increased between the
ages
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of 46 and 56.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Replace the words earnings, degree, holders, first, degrees, ages with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "gradually" was used 2 times.
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