The graph shows the amount earned by graduates of different age groups in 2002. It includes those with a degree, those with a higher degree (postgraduate) and those with other qualifications. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The graph illustrates the
earnings
obtained by degree
holders
of three contrasting educational levels in 2002.
Overall
, during 2002, the incomes of those with first
and other degrees
decreased with increasing age, while
higher degree
incomes were moderately rising. At ages
from
21 to 25, those with Change preposition
apply
first
degrees
had the lowest earnings
. Those with other types of degrees
had the greatest gains, whereas
postgraduate earnings
were gradually increasing.
The first
major feature is that the earnings
of other type
of Change the wording
another type
other types
degree
holders
increased dramatically to about 810 at an average age of 36 to 40, but then
unexpectedly dropped to about 730 between the ages
of 46 and 55 as age increased, and then
gradually decreased to 690 between the ages
of 56 and 60.
On the other hand
, holders
of higher degrees
grew from about 380 to approximately 780 between the ages
of 55 and 56. Likewise
, the holders
of the first
Add a hyphen
first-degree
degree
earnings
climbed from 350 to 690 and then
remained stable at ages
36–41, then
dropped to around 670, and then
slowly increased between the ages
of 46 and 56.Submitted by acaitaz on
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