The graph shows the amount earned by graduates of different age groups in 2002. It includes those with a degree, those with a higher degree (postgraduate) and those with other qualifications. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The graph illustrates the
earnings
obtained by Use synonyms
degree
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holders
of three contrasting educational levels in 2002.
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Overall
, during 2002, the incomes of those with Linking Words
first
and other Use synonyms
degrees
decreased with increasing age, Use synonyms
while
higher Linking Words
degree
incomes were moderately rising. At Use synonyms
ages
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from
21 to 25, those with Change preposition
apply
first
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degrees
had the lowest Use synonyms
earnings
. Those with other types of Use synonyms
degrees
had the greatest gains, Use synonyms
whereas
postgraduate Linking Words
earnings
were gradually increasing.
The Use synonyms
first
major feature is that the Use synonyms
earnings
of Use synonyms
other type
of Change the wording
another type
other types
degree
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holders
increased dramatically to about 810 at an average age of 36 to 40, but Use synonyms
then
unexpectedly dropped to about 730 between the Linking Words
ages
of 46 and 55 as age increased, and Use synonyms
then
gradually decreased to 690 between the Linking Words
ages
of 56 and 60.
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On the other hand
, Linking Words
holders
of higher Use synonyms
degrees
grew from about 380 to approximately 780 between the Use synonyms
ages
of 55 and 56. Use synonyms
Likewise
, the Linking Words
holders
of the Use synonyms
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first
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first-degree
degree
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earnings
climbed from 350 to 690 and Use synonyms
then
remained stable at Linking Words
ages
36–41, Use synonyms
then
dropped to around 670, and Linking Words
then
slowly increased between the Linking Words
ages
of 46 and 56.Use synonyms
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Vocabulary: Replace the words earnings, degree, holders, first, degrees, ages with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "gradually" was used 2 times.
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