The graph shows the amount earned by graduates of different age groups in 2002. It includes those with a degree, those with a higher degree (postgraduate) and those with other qualifications. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph shows the amount

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earned

by graduates of different age groups in 2002. It includes those with a

degree

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, those with a higher

degree

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and those with other qualifications. Summarise the information by

selectng

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selecting

and reporting the main features

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and making

comparisons where relevant. The line graph

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a correlation between

income

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the income

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of employees from different agencies and qualification in

pounds

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, with

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the x-axis

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showing age groups with

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increments

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of 4 years, from 21-25 to 56-60, and the y-axis showing

amount

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the amount

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of money earned, with

increment

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increments

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of 100

pounds

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. Three line represent 3 types of qualification: people with first

degree

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start career with the values of income of about 350

pounds

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at 21-24, amount sharply rise to about 690 at 36-40 and platoeaing 690 at 56-60; Postgraduate earn near ly 390

pounds

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at first period 21-25, and salary significantly increase to 750 at 41-45, it followed by a slight decline 710 at the age of 51-55, peaking at the ages 56-60 with figures of 790; Staff with other degrees

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have upward trend from 21-25 with 410

pounds

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, the higher figures at the start, to at the interval of 36-40,

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after previously mentioned period saw a slight decrease to 690

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at 56-60.

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, all three university leavers witnessed a marked similarity between them, after a steep climb

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figures

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except

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for higher

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degree

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another rise

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period mentioned.