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WRITING TASK 1 You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The two maps below show the village of Bunborough in the present day and plans for the village in 2024. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

WRITING TASK 1 You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The two maps below show the village of Bunborough in the present day and plans for the village in 2024. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
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The images here presented show the city of Bunborough, the first one indicates the situation in
present
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the present
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 day and the second one
the
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 plan proposed for 2024.
Firstly
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, it can be seen that both the shops, in the
center
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 of the village, and the beach,
in
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 the right angle, will remain in the same position and condition.
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, streets are going to be upgraded with the addition of a new one, right in the middle.
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, houses above the horizontal highway will be expanded.
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, the two
buldings
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buildings
 under the road are not going to be in the future project, a new train station is going to be situated there
instead
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.
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, a
trainline
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train line
training
 will be built from the south,
throught
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through
 a vertical path to
east
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.
In addition
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, a
promedate
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promenade
predate
 will replace 2 out of the 3 fishing ports on the upper coast. In conclusion,
an
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 hotel is going to be created on the left of the beaches.
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