The two maps below show the village of Bunborough in the present day and plans for the village in 2024. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words. Bunborough map

The two maps below show the village of Bunborough in the present day and plans for the village in 2024.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.

Bunborough map
There are
two
maps showing the current view of Bunborough and the future planning towards
this
place in 2024.
Overall
,
this
village is planning to make significant changes in terms of its infrastructure by adding more industrial elements to a specific area as a development to
this
place.
In
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present, the only way people
are travelling
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is by the roads that are connected from the housing area to the
two
types of cities, which are
Maychester
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Manchester
, in the north, and Lynwich, which is located in the south.
However
, in 2024, they are planning to add a railroad and an additional road to connect the concentrated area to the Lynwich. Currently, there is a fishing port at the seashore near the shops, but,
surprising
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enough,
promenade
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the promenade
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is what they are planning to replace the fishing port.
Additionally
, in the few years ahead,
two
hotels are going to be built at
two
different places; one of them will be built near the promenade, and the other one will be built near the beach on the other side of the river, where the new road will connect between these
two
hotels.
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  • Anticipation
  • Significant
  • Conversion
  • Commercial activities
  • Expansion
  • Enhancing
  • Bypassing
  • Congestion
  • Connectivity
  • Recreational area
  • Demolition
  • Infrastructure
  • Preservation
  • Public transportation hub
  • Encourage
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