The diagram below shows the process of making a violin by hand. summarise the information summarise the data by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows the process of making a violin by hand. summarise the information 

summarise the data by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The process diagram demonstrates the stages involved in the manufacture of a violin.
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, it is a manual linear process consisting of nine different phases, beginning with the cutting of a thin piece of wood and ending with the final produced violin. To start with, a thin piece of wood is carved out in the shape of the body of
violin
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a violin
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with the help of a saw resulting
into
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two separate sheets of material for the back and front.
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, a cutting tool is used to create two f-holes in the middle of the front part between which a bass bar is placed with the help of glue. After that, a heating device shapes the unshaped ribs into strips which are
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attached along the circumference of the back part using
a
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apply
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glue.
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this
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, the back and the front
part
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are put together to form the body,
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the neck is attached to a scroll extending its length.
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, the neck is placed on to the top of the body before adding parts like strings with a varnish, which
end
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ends
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up giving it the completed look.
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