The diagram below shows the process of making a violin by hand. summarise the information summarise the data by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows the process of making a violin by hand. summarise the information 

summarise the data by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The process diagram demonstrates the stages involved in the manufacture of a violin.
Overall
, it is a manual linear process consisting of nine different phases, beginning with the cutting of a thin piece of wood and ending with the final produced violin. To start with, a thin piece of wood is carved out in the shape of the body of
violin
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with the help of a saw resulting
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two separate sheets of material for the back and front.
Subsequently
, a cutting tool is used to create two f-holes in the middle of the front part between which a bass bar is placed with the help of glue. After that, a heating device shapes the unshaped ribs into strips which are
then
attached along the circumference of the back part using
a
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glue.
Following
this
, the back and the front
part
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are put together to form the body,
while
the neck is attached to a scroll extending its length.
Finally
, the neck is placed on to the top of the body before adding parts like strings with a varnish, which
end
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up giving it the completed look.
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