You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The diagrams below show the site of a school in 2004 and the plan for changes to the school site in 2024. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The diagrams below show the site of a school in

2004 and the plan for changes to the school site

in 2024.

Summarise the information by selecting and

reporting the main features, and make

comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words
The presented maps demonstrate alternatives that have been happening for the
school
between 2004 and 2024.
Overall
, it is crucial that the sector of vegetation is reduced
while
the number of not only facilities but
also
students increases.
According to
the pictures, in the west of the
area
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area,
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we can see the
road
, the car park, and the main entrances, the same in both times, In 2004 around the building was a green area;
however
,
this
region is divided into the car park 2, behind the
school
places, the
road
, that connect carpark 1 to car park 2, and the sports field, in the south of carpark 2. The graphs illustrate that the main
school
place, in the north of the site, has a path which was the main
road
for going to building1 and 2 and the sports field;
nevertheless
, a part of
this
path is destroyed;
moreover
, it becomes the
road
for connecting building3 to building 1 and 2 of
school
together;
additionally
, every
school
building has a door to the roads.
In addition
, the number of students who study in
this
place has been climbed from 600 to 1000.
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