The diagrams below show the site of a school in 2004 and the plan for changes to the school site in 2024. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

IELTS Writing Task Chart for The diagrams below show the site of a school in 2004 and the plan for changes to the school site in 2024. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The presented maps demonstrate alternatives that have been happening for the

school

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between 2004 and 2024.

Overall

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, it is crucial that the sector of vegetation is reduced

while

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the number of not only facilities but

also

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students increases.

According to

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the pictures, in the west of the

area

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area,

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we can see the

road

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, the car park, and the main entrances, the same in both times, In 2004 around the building was a green area;

however

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this

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region is divided into the car park 2, behind the

school

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places, the

road

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, that connect carpark 1 to car park 2, and the sports field, in the south of carpark 2. The graphs illustrate that the main

school

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place, in the north of the site, has a path which was the main

road

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for going to building1 and 2 and the sports field;

nevertheless

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, a part of

this

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path is destroyed;

moreover

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, it becomes the

road

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for connecting building3 to building 1 and 2 of

school

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together;

additionally

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, every

school

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building has a door to the roads.

In addition

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, the number of students who study in

this

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place has been climbed from 600 to 1000.

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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words school, road with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.

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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
2
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

192 words

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