Your local newspaper wants to reward people who have contributed much to the community. Write a letter to the newspaper editor recommending someone in your community. In your letter •describe who the person is and how you know them; •describe their contributions to the community; •explain why you think they deserve the reward.
Hello Team,
I am writing
this
letter to recommend a person who contributes a lot to the community
.
Mr
Charles
is the person I am recommending who have
been our municipal chairman for Correct subject-verb agreement
has
last
5 years Correct article usage
the last
with
his previous experience in Change preposition
apply
Air
Force Correct article usage
the Air
have
helped the Change the verb form
has
community
welfare.
There is
numerous contributions by Change the verb form
are
Charles
to our community
. The
couple of Correct article usage
A
reason
I Fix the agreement mistake
reasons
choose
him is because he was the one who helped Wrong verb form
chose
as
to open the public library which has been a dream for all Correct word choice
apply
off
us for years.
Renovation for the public park with extra rides for kids and more Replace the word
of
tree
has been planted Fix the agreement mistake
trees
comes
true just because of Correct subject-verb agreement
come
Mr
Charles
.
Most underdeveloped was our healthcare system which doesn't
Wrong verb form
didn't
had
any proper Change the verb form
have
equipment's
. Renovation and buying new Change noun form
equipment
equipment's
was really challenging Change the noun form
equipments
equipment
due to
the fund. Mr
Charles
organised a carnival which attracts
a lot of Wrong verb form
attracted
community
and people from other cities which helped as
to raise Correct word choice
apply
the
Correct article usage
apply
fund
and helped in the renovation Fix the agreement mistake
funds
for
Change preposition
of
hospital
.
I strongly recommend Add an article
the hospital
a hospital
Mr
Charles
to be rewarded as a person he have
contributed Change the verb form
has
alot
to the Correct your spelling
a lot
community
.
Thanks and regards,
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grammar
Ensure all verbs agree in number with their subjects and check for spelling errors.
clarity
Use more specific examples and clear expressions to fully engage your reader and strengthen your recommendation.
structure
Organize ideas into separate paragraphs for each contributing point made about Mr. Charles.
task achievement
The letter presents clear details about Mr. Charles's contributions, which supports the recommendation.
tone
The tone is appropriate and respectful throughout the letter.
coherence
The letter includes a clear greeting and closing, which enhances its structure.
Structure your letter
A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:
- A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
- The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
- A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)
When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.
All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.