Your local newspaper wants to reward people who have contributed much to the community. Write a letter to the newspaper editor recommending someone in your community. In your letter •describe who the person is and how you know them; •describe their contributions to the community; •explain why you think they deserve the reward.

Hello Team, I am writing
this
letter to recommend a person who contributes a lot to the
community
.
Mr
Charles
is the person I am recommending who
have
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been our municipal chairman for
last
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5 years
with
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his previous experience in
Air
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Force
have
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helped the
community
welfare. There
is
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are
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numerous contributions by
Charles
to our
community
.
The
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couple of
reason
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I
choose
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him is because he was the one who helped
as
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to open the public library which has been a dream for all
off
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us for years. Renovation for the public park with extra rides for kids and more
tree
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has been planted
comes
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true just because of
Mr
Charles
. Most underdeveloped was our healthcare system which
doesn't
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had
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any proper
equipment's
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. Renovation and buying new
equipment's
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equipments
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was really challenging
due to
the fund.
Mr
Charles
organised a carnival which
attracts
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a lot of
community
and people from other cities which helped
as
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to raise
the
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fund
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funds
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and helped in the renovation
for
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hospital
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the hospital
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. I strongly recommend
Mr
Charles
to be rewarded as a person he
have
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contributed
alot
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a lot
to the
community
. Thanks and regards, Xyz
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grammar
Ensure all verbs agree in number with their subjects and check for spelling errors.
clarity
Use more specific examples and clear expressions to fully engage your reader and strengthen your recommendation.
structure
Organize ideas into separate paragraphs for each contributing point made about Mr. Charles.
task achievement
The letter presents clear details about Mr. Charles's contributions, which supports the recommendation.
tone
The tone is appropriate and respectful throughout the letter.
coherence
The letter includes a clear greeting and closing, which enhances its structure.

Structure your letter

A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:

  • A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
  • The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
  • A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)

When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.

All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.

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