The graph below shows the consumption of fish and some different kinds of meat in a European country between 1979 and 2004. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The line graph illustrates the amount of chicken,

beef

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, lamb, and

fish

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consumed in a European country from 1979 to 2004.

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, the intake of

beef

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, lamb and

fish

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decreased over the years,

whereas

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that of chicken increased significantly.

Fish

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continued to be the least consumed item throughout the 25-year

period

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. In 1979,

beef

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started the

period

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with the highest consumption of nearly 225

grams

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per person per week tending to some fluctuations before peaking just below 250 in 1984.

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consumption saw a gradual

declined

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over the years ending the

period

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with approximately 100

grams

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per person per week.

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downward trend was followed by both lamb and

fish

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which began the

period

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with 150

grams

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and just over 50

grams

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, respectively and dropped to almost 60 and 50

grams

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in 2004, respectively.

Chicken’s

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Chicken

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consumption,

on the other hand

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, grew dramatically from around 150

grams

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in 1979, overtaking

beef

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in 1989 to be the most preferred meat as it continued to rise over the remaining

period

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, peaking at nearly 250

grams

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in 2004.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words beef, fish, period, grams with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 2 times.

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4
Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
4
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2
Grammar mistakes
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

174 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

consumption
metric tons
fluctuations
upward/downward trend
stabilize
peak
trough
overtake
steady decline/increase
sustainable
dietary habits
preferences
health consciousness
per capita
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