The table below shows the percentage of adults in urban and rural areas who took part in four free time activities in 1990 and 2010. Summarise the information and compare where relevant, by selecting and reporting the key features.

The table below shows the percentage of adults in urban and rural areas who took part in four free time activities in 1990 and 2010. Summarise the information and compare where relevant, by selecting and reporting the key features.
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The presented table compares data about the fraction of elderly people who lived in cities or the countryside and spent their leisure time on 4 various elements in 2 different times namely, 1990 and 2010.
Overall
, it was important that the population who live in the rural regions spent more time on these activities
instead
of the cities' inhabitants ;
moreover
, the trend of activities increased over the period of 20 years.
According to
the diagram, at the start, Reading, the most popular activity among people in
both
times, hit 71 and 61 for Rural and urban;
then
both
of them in 2010 reached the same portion of 78%. Playing, the second element that had a lot of fans, touched 26% for rural in
both
years;
however
, urban had reduced fashion from 21% in 1990 to 14% in 2010. The graph demonstrates that in the bigging the third factor that was Animate play scored 18% and 10% for rural and urban;
thereafter
, the proportion of rural declined to 14%
while
another did not change in 2010 from the prior portion. The
last
item in 1990 was Photography;
furthermore
, the percentage of rural was two times more than urban by 7%. Later its direction improved very well owing to the fact that
both
rural and urban had a 10% jump in 2010 from the previous.
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