The pie charts indicate changes in the proportions of energy produced in a country from 1983 to 2003. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The pie charts indicate changes in the proportions of energy produced in a country from 1983 to 2003.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie charts illustrate modifications in the figures for
energy
produced in a country between 1983 and 2003.
Overall
,
it is clear that
the proportions of
oil
and coal
energy
produced decreased significantly
while
the figures for nuclear power and natural gas
energy
increased and the proportion of hydropower
energy
produced was the same over the period shown. Remarkably,
oil
energy
produced accounted for far by the highest proportion of the total. Looking at the information in more detail, we can see that the highest proportion of
energy
produced in a country in 1983 was
oil
, with 43%, the second highest was coal, with about a quarter of the total ( 23%), followed by nuclear power, with 20%,
finally
, natural gas and hydropower, with 11% and 4%, respectively. In 2003, despite decreasing to 38%,
oil
energy
still situated at the top of the total, after growing to 24%, nuclear power is close second to
oil
, followed by natural gas and coal, with 21% and 13%, respectively.
Finally
, the figure for hydropower produced in
this
country still maintained, with 4%
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Vocabulary: Replace the words energy, oil with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportions" was used 4 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • proportions
  • energy sources
  • increases
  • decreases
  • trends
  • analysis
  • significant
  • compare
  • changes over time
  • introduction
  • phase out
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