Some species of animals are almost extinct; and many others seem to be fast approaching a similar risk. What are the reasons for this? What should be done to solve this problem?

It is true that some species of

animals

are

endagered

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endangered

nowadays. Human

activities

is

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considered the main reason why

this

is the case, and governments and residents should be responsible for solving

this

problem. The biggest factor leading to

this

problem is that human

activities

impact to extinction of many species of

animals

because of poaching for consumption or

fashion

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industry.

Moreover

, maximizing buildings and

infrastuctures

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infrastructures

infrastructure

can encroach

animal

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on animal

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habitats.

For example

,

according to

the latest research conducted by Bangkok University, Thailand, it was

reavealed

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revealed

that 60% of fashion industries in Thailand utilize

animal's

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animal

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skin

for

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to

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produce lether

procucts

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products

such

as bags, shoes and clothes.

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example shows that human

activities

play a major role in animal extinction. In order to solve

this

issue, governments and residents should take action as soon as possible. The most significant solution to support

this

the

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fact that governments should introduce laws to preserve natural areas and wild

animals

. The citizens

also

should participate in

campaign

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willingly.

Thus

,

animals

should have

thier

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their

own

sacrified

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sacrificed

lives, and it can affect to

maintain

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biodiversity

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of biodiversity

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and ecology balance. If

animals

will be

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not protected as soon as possible, they will die out obviously. To illustrate

this

, in recent news, it has been reported that there is abundant wildlife in Costa Rica because the government has impulsive regulations for preventing hunting

wild

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of wild

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animals

. In conclusion, some species of

animals

are almost extinct because of human

activities

. In order to combat

this

,

govenments

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governments

and citizens should be responsible for solving

this

problem together.