You have seen a job advertised in the newspaper. You want to apply for the job. Write a letter to the manager of the company. In your letter • provide information about yourself • give details of your previous work experience • say why the company should consider you for the job You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows:

Dear Manager, I am Nishan; hope
this
email finds you well. I saw an advertisement in the newspaper regarding
job
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opening in your company and
interested
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in
this
opportunity. I have graduated
from
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a Bachelors
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Bachelors
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Bachelor
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of
science
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and have 5 years of industry experience in development and designing
the
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apply
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application
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applications
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based on business requirements. I am currently working at Telstra company as
Consultant
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a Consultant
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role and JAVA ,AWS,
SQl
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and SQl
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are my skill set.
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, have good experience in managing
team
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. I am zeal to
adopt
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adapt
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new
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environment
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quickly and willing to explore
the
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things!
Moreover
, I am
also
actively looking for
job
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change and have learnt about the opening position in your company. Based on
aforementioned
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reason
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, I am delighted to embrace
this
opportunity with
open
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mind and suitable for the position of Senior Consultant with
required
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skill set.
Also
, I am attaching
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resume for your review .Would you please consider my request and let me know the update? Your prompt response in
this
matter is highly appreciated! Your's Sincerely, Nishan Mehra.
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single idea per paragraph
Ensure each paragraph covers a single idea for better clarity and focus.
logical structure
Consider separating your skills and detail into their own paragraph to improve readability.
complete response
The letter covers all points of the task, including personal background, work experience, and reasons for consideration.
suitable writing tone
The letter maintains a suitable and professional tone throughout.
greeting and closing
The greeting and closing are appropriately structured for a formal letter.

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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