You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The graphs show the changes in the UK industry steel between 1970 and 2000. (million tonnes vs thousand). Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Value changes in UK steel industry 1970-2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The graphs show the changes in the UK industry steel between 1970 and 2000. (million tonnes vs thousand). Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Value changes in UK steel industry 1970-2000.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The provided graphs illustrate the alterations in the valuation and the employment figures of
steel
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industry in the UK during the period of 1970 to 2000.
Overall
, it can be seen that the UK has witnessed a significant downturn trend in aggregate demand,
manufacture
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, and the number of employment.
In addition
, the gradually upward trend was only observed for
steel
import
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imports
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. To be more specific,
at
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the beginning, the entire demand for
steel
in the UK was 200000
tonnes
,
meanwhile
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there were about 153000
tonnes
of
steel
manufactured in
this
year. The figures for
steel
import
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nearly reached zero
tonnes
in1970
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in 1970
. Over the next 30 years, the total demand and
steel
production alleviated twofold, finishing at 100000
tonnes
and approximately 80000
tonnes
, respectively.
Conversely
,
steel
importing witnessed a jump to about 70000
tonnes
at the end
of the period. A closer look at the second chart reveals, in 1970, there were 50000 people working in the
steel
sector, but
this
figure
proned
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prone
proved
to
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as the years passed by, with a sharp decline from 40000 in 1980 to around 20000 thousand in 1990,
finally
, roughly 18000 employees worked in
steel
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industry in 200.
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