The bar chart below shows the average Australian water consumption in selected cities for last year. The pie chart shows the distribution of Australian water consumption for last year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart below shows the average Australian water consumption in selected cities for last year. The pie chart shows the distribution of Australian water consumption for last year.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar graph illustrates the amount of average
water
usage by Australian citizens in six cities of Australia.
Whereas
, pie chart represents the percentage of
water
consumption in different sectors in 2014. The unit of the graph is measured in
kilolitres
per property.
Overall
, it is evident that the majority of the
water
was consumed by residents of Perth.
Moreover
, a very large proportion of
water
was required in Agriculture.
To begin
with, 300
kilolitres
of
water
was used by each property of Perth,
however
, Brisbane came in second with 250
kilolitres
.
Furthermore
,
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slightly above 150
kilolitre
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was consumed by
people
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of Melbourne and Canberra. Sydney accounted for exactly 200
kilolitres
per property. It can be seen that
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more than half of the
water
was required for agricultural purposes, and at second household with only 9%
water
consumption. The same percentage of
water
was used for
Water
supply, sewage ,drainage and electricity, and gas supply. A similar 8% of
water
was distributed between manufacturing and other industries. A very small proportion was given for mining.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words water, kilolitres with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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