The graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices of three metals during 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph indicates how the prices of copper,

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and zinc

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changed monthly, during the

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2014. as it can be seen from the line graph, the fluctuation of the

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of the

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is more obvious

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the other two metals. the

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of

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decreased significantly in the first two months of the

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.

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the

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of

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zinc rose moderately from January to February. the

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of the

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plunged one more time

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between May and June, which made

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to be the cheapest metal among others. all of the metals mentioned

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were standing steadily from July to September and they all dropped slightly the next month.

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conclusion, the

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copper

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been changing moderately

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has been through more fluctuations during the

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. the copper

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changed from the cheapest

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the beginning, to the most expensive

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the end of the

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.