You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The graphs show the changes in the UK industry steel between 1970 and 2000. (million tonnes vs thousand). Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Value changes in UK steel industry 1970-2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words
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The provided graph depicts the changes in value and
employment
status in the UK
steel industry from 1970 to 2000.
Overall
, it can clearly be seen that UK
production and imports witnessed a downward trend, while
their total demand increased. Followed
by, Wrong verb form
Following
UK's
Correct article usage
the UK's
employment
had a significant downfall.
Looking at the information in more detail, both the production and import of the UK
diminished drastically over the given period of time, they stood at 1 and approximately 17 million tonnes respectively, regarding the employment
in the UK
also
started to decrease in the same period. Whereas
, the British's demand remained to increase till it reached about 15 million tonnes from 1970 to 2000, as the need got higher and higher each year the fewer employees are qualified
causing the Change the adjective
qualifiedly
employment
status in UK
to Correct article usage
the UK
dropping
down to under 20 thousand.Change the verb form
drop
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words employment, uk with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "changes" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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