The graph below show the consumption of fish and some different kinds of meat in a European country between 1979 and 2004.

The graph below show the consumption of fish and some different kinds of meat in a European country between 1979 and 2004.
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The given graph reveals data about how fish and four types of meat were eaten in a European country during a twenty-five-year period from 1979 to 2004.
Overall
, it is clearly seen from the graph that all of the figures witnessed a downward trend with the exception of chicken. Interestingly, chicken became the most consumed meat of the total types. In 1979,beef was the most eaten at approximately 220
grams
and
then
after some fluctuations it ended with 100
grams
in 2004. The figure for Lamb started at 150
grams
per week,
then
went down to approximately 120
grams
before decreasing
further
and
at the end
of the period was at the level of 75
grams
per week. Fish was the lowest, at the level of 65,
Hovewer
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However
,after years of extremely slow decrease finished at 50
grams
per week in 2004.
In contrast
, chicken began with 145 after seeing a little increase of 30
grams
in 1999, it went up and reached its peak at the level of 250 in 2004 and ended up being the most consumed.
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