The graph below gives information about the percentage of the population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The aim of
this
report is to discuss the percentage
of the population in four Asian countries
living in cities
from 1970 to 2020, with the
predictions for 2030 and 2040. The Correct article usage
apply
countries
are Philippines
, Correct article usage
the Philippines
Malaysia
, Thailand and Indonesia
. Statistics are based on a graph
.
Overall
, in all four countries
the trend of living in the Add a comma
countries,
cities
as the years
pass is rising. In Indonesia
the Add a comma
Indonesia,
percentage
rose from 15% to around 50% during the years
of
1970 and 2020, with the prediction that it’s going to rise around 10% more in the following 20 Change preposition
apply
years
. A similar trend is in Malaysia
as the percentage
hasn't stopped growing and in the last
50 years
went up approximately 50% and has a prediction of increasing even more. In Thailand and Correct article usage
the Philippines
Philippines
the Add a comma
Philippines,
graph
fluctuates a bit more and had a slight decrease since
1990 until 2010 when it went up again, but these Change preposition
from
countries
have the least amount of changes as only 20% of the people
moved to the city in 50 years
, but there is a
speculation which states that around 20% more Remove the article
apply
people
will move to the cities
in the near future.
Given the data, it can be seen that Malaysia
tops every country off and around 80% of people
were living in the cities
in the year 2020, even if it hadn’t
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didn’t
had
the highest number of residents in Wrong verb form
have
cities
in the year of
1970. The lowest Change preposition
apply
percentage
of townspeople in 1970 was 15% but it skyrocketed and is predicted to reach 60% by 2040 in Indonesia
. The most fluctuating graph
is the Philippines
graph
as it started from having 30% of city residents reached 50% and within 20 years
decreased by 10%, but is predicted to reach the 50% mark again.
Generally, the increment of city residents in four Asian countries
have
no correlation between them, but similarities can be seen. In Correct subject-verb agreement
has
Indonesia
and Malaysia
there has been a steady increase, Add a comma
Malaysia,
while
in Thailand and Correct article usage
the Philippines
Philippines
there has been a drop and the Add a comma
Philippines,
percentage
of people
living in cities
didn’t rise as much as in the other two counties
.Correct your spelling
countries
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