The graph below shows the quantities of goods transported in the UK between 1974 and 2002 by four different modes of transport. You should write at least 150 words.
The given graph illustrates the number of goods transported in the United Kingdom from 1974 to 2002 in the four major types of transportation. Units are measured in million tonnes.
Overall
, it can clearly be seen that by
road was the most used Change preposition
apply
mode
of transport for overall
the period. Moreover
, in contrast
, the pipeline
is the least used mode
of transport by people in the UK.
In terms of the transport mode
with the highest level of use by patrons, roads at the beginning of the year 1975 started at approximately 70. In the following five years experienced a slightly
decrease to around 65. From Change the adverb
slight
this
point onwards, utilizations of roads increased relatively stable,
and reached a peak of about 90 in the final year.
Regarding the lower types of transportation Remove the comma
apply
mode
use, by pipeline
started at below 20, and experienced a moderately
rise to around 25 in the between of 1980 and 1985. From Change the word
moderate
this
point onwards, experienced a relatively stable until 2000 at 20. However
, regarding the two types of transportation, rail, and pipeline
, in the first year with similar points. converged at 40. Thereafter
, in 2000, the use of rail and pipeline
ended at the point of 40 and just above 60, respectively.Submitted by yannn
on
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "overall".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words mode, pipeline with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "stable" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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