The graph compares the percentage of international and the percentage of UK students gaining second class degrees or better at a major UK University in 2009.
The graph portrays the comparison between the average of second-class degrees or majors gained by international and
UK
students
at UK
university
in the year 2009.
Fix the agreement mistake
universities
Overall
, the percentages in the degrees of Nursing and Accountancy were the same, whereas
international students
dominated in Electrical Engineering and Information Technology. Meanwhile, UK
students
remained more in number in the rest of the degrees or majors like Art history, Sociology, English literature and international law.
Firstly
, 80% and approximately 85% students
in the Electric Engineering and information technology were international. Change preposition
of students
Moreover
, in Nursing and Accountancy, both students
were in the same percentage of 60% and 75%. Comparatively in Art history, 70% of the students
were from UK
.Correct article usage
the UK
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