You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.  The table below shows the sales made by a coffee shop in an office building on a typical weekday. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

 The table below shows the sales made by a coffee shop in an office building on a typical weekday.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The table provides data on the revenue generated by a coffee shop at various times of the day, focusing on four elements: coffee, tea, pastries, and sandwiches in a workplace setting.
Overall
, a notable trend is that sales peak during the early morning as shown in the table, but the lowest earnings occur during the third time period. If we take a glance at the first hours of the day, we can note that the majority of buys account for
pastires
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pastries
pastures
and coffee, which was 275 and 265 respectively, followed by tea,
while
sandwiches
acheived
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achieved
the lowest purchases amount. During the second interval, which covers late morning hours, the demands for
sandwich
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sandwiches
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sharply rise to 200 units,
while
deals for the other items significantly decline.
In contrast
, the third time period sees a gradual increase for pastry,
while
the other products generally reduce.
However
, during the night shift, pastry orders drop, and the other goods rebound.
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