The diagrams below show the development of the village of Kelsbey between 1780 and 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagrams below show the development of the village of Kelsbey between 1780 and 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The map illustrates the changes that occurred in the village of Kelsbey in the
years
1780, 1860 and 2000.
Overall
, in all three periods, the location of the
river
remained the same in all three
years
. The changes happened in the village
area
on the east side of the water.
To begin
with, the
river
's position in 1780 stayed the same till 2000.
However
, a bridge was built in 1860 to connect the east with the west side of the
river
.
In addition
, the farming
area
on the right of the bridge, reduced its size to a half in 1860, to fully disappear 140
years
later. On the east-south side of the
river
, 5 shops were constructed in the year 2000. Next to the
river
, the dry
area
did transform from being a place full
with
Change preposition
of
show examples
trees with 100 houses to a total of 200 houses with less wood in 1860.
Furthermore
, 140
years
later, more houses were built, and many other functions were added south in the removed wood
area
, like schools and sports fields, with a total of 2 and 3 respectively.
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