The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010.
The bar chart illustrates the percentage of Australian
men
and Use synonyms
women
across various Use synonyms
age
groups who engaged in regular physical activity in 2010.
Use synonyms
Overall
, the data reveal a noticeable trend: Linking Words
women
tended to participate in physical exercise more consistently than Use synonyms
men
from the ages of 25 to 64. Use synonyms
However
, younger Linking Words
men
aged 15 to 24 were more active compared to their female counterparts. By the Use synonyms
age
of 65 and above, the Use synonyms
participation
rates between genders became almost identical.
In the youngest Use synonyms
age
group (15 to 24 years old), 52.8% of males exercised regularly, surpassing the 47.7% recorded for females. Use synonyms
However
, the trend reverses from the 25-34 Linking Words
age
bracket onward, with female Use synonyms
participation
increasing to 48.9%, Use synonyms
while
male Linking Words
participation
drops to 42.2%.
The proportion of Use synonyms
women
engaging in physical activity continues to rise steadily with Use synonyms
age
. Between the ages of 35 and 64, female Use synonyms
participation
remains above 52%, peaking at 53.3% in the 45-54 Use synonyms
age
group. Use synonyms
In contrast
, Linking Words
men
’s Use synonyms
participation
follows a declining trend, with figures dropping to 39.5% in the 35-44 group and remaining below 47% up to the Use synonyms
age
of 64.
Use synonyms
Finally
, in the 65 and over category, both genders showed nearly equal Linking Words
participation
, with 47.1% of Use synonyms
women
and 46.7% of Use synonyms
men
exercising regularly. Use synonyms
This
convergence suggests that gender differences in physical activity narrow in older Linking Words
age
.Use synonyms
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