The line graph gives information about the usage of Facebook and Twitter in Australia. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The above line graph demonstrates the average proportions of people
used
Correct pronoun usage
who used
Facebook
and Twitter
platsform
in Australia from 2012 to 2016.
The most significant feature is Correct your spelling
platform
platforms
Twitter
score was the highest number in 2016 .Change noun form
Twitter's
While
Facebooks
percentage had the strongest rate in 2014.
It is noticeable that the percentage of Change to a genitive case
Facebook's
Facebook
and Twitter
useages had a
Correct article usage
apply
approximetaly
a similar score in 2012 between 20 to 25. It is evident, the number of Correct your spelling
approximately
Twitter
sharply decline
in 2013 to 15. Wrong verb form
declined
In contrast
, Facebooks
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Facebook
show
Wrong verb form
showed
steady
increase to 30 in 2014.Add an article
a steady
Moreover
, the percentage of Twitter
remained stable with approximately similar
range in 2013,2014,2015 within 14,10,14.Correct article usage
a similar
However
, the score of Facebook
show
Wrong verb form
showed
dramatically
growth to 30 in 2014 Change the adverb
dramatic
then
stayed at same
level in 2015.Add an article
the same
Conversly
, Correct your spelling
Conversely
Twitter
started to raised
to Verb problem
rise
reached
the peak point in 2016 at 35.Change the form of the verb
reach
In
addition
Add a comma
addition,
Facebook
received 32 in 2016.Submitted by rahafalkhashti7 on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words facebook, twitter with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
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