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The graphs below show the site of an airport now and how it will look after redevelopment next year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graphs below show the site of an airport now and how it will look after redevelopment next year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The presented maps demonstrate data about alternatives that will happen in the area of airports at two various times namely, now and future.
Overall
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, it will be important that the facilities that will aid passengers to have an enjoyable time climb over the period of 1 year.
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 the pictures, Today, the arrivals sections have one door without any equipment;
however
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, next year, one entrance will become two doors;
moreover
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, the Cafe, next to the
passport
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control
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, the ATM, and the Car park, in the south of the zone, will be added.
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, the departures, which are next to the arrivals, have the cafe, next to the Security
passport
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control
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 and will be replaced by Check-in , and the Check-in, which will be altered by the Bag drop;
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, they will add the cafe bottom of the bag drop. The diagrams illustrate that not only the Security
passport
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control
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 but
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 the
passport
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control
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 customs will be the same as the prior , yet in the north of the Security
passport
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control
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 will establish new shops;
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, the number of gates will be increased from 8 to 18, and the walkway in gates will be changed by the sky train.
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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words passport, control with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "drop" was used 2 times.
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