The chart below shows the amount of leisure time enjoyed by men and women of different employment status. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The chart presents the
amount
of spare time
enjoyed by males and females in various employment situations.
Overall
, the amount
of leisure time
men have is noticeably higher compared to women in all of the shared employment statuses, but men are not presented in all of the occupations above , such
as part-time
employees and housewives.
However
, full-time
employees have the least amount
of free time
with approximately 45 for males and 35 for females . As for part-time
employees, the column is at 40 for women and no data for men .
Furthermore
, both unemployed and retired individuals get a substantial amount
of free time
with the same numbers , namely 85 for males and roughly 76 for women . The last
category is housewives, a group of individuals who get 50 of their spare time
. the column illustrates the data about females with no information on their counterparts .Submitted by omniah15 on
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