The charts below give information on the location and types of dance classes young people in a town in Australia are currently attending. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The first chart illustrates the percentages of each location of

dance

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classes in Australia, and the second chart

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the types of

dance

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classes with respect to age. The two largest percentages belong to private studios and community halls with 48 and 18 percent, respectively. The most

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dance

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type is the "Ballet", with roughly 600

students

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attending

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this

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class

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half of them are under 11 and the others are between 11 to 16 years old.

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, the "Tap"

class

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is placed in the second rank with approximately 880

students

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, in total. Most of them are above 11.

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"Modern"

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the "Modern"

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class

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is the only

class

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that has more under-eleven ages. The college-based studios have the

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lowest

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percentage among all other locations. Totally, there are roughly 1200

students

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are

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under 11 and 1350

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are between 11 to 16 years old.

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, based on these numbers, "Ballet" is the most popular

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class

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to other classes.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words dance, students, class with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 3 times.

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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

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Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

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160 words

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The charts below give information on the location and types of dance classes young people in a town in Australia are currently attending. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Children nowadays spend a great deal of time watching T.V . However, TV cannot replace the book as a learning tool,which is why children are less well educated today,to what extent do you agree with this statement ?

Some think that young people should be free to choose any career they like, while others say that they should think more realistically about their future. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your experience.

Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems.

Air transport is increasingly used to export fruit and vegetables to countries where they cannot be grown or are out of season. What the advantages and disadvantages of this?

Nowadays, education overseas has become more accessible and growing numbers of people send their offspring to study in other countries. However, this trend has its detractors. I strongly believe that the pros far outweigh the cons, and will examine both below.