The maps below show the centre of a small town called islip as it is now, and plans for its development. Summaries the information by selecting amd reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.

The maps below show the centre of a small town called islip as it is now, and plans for its development. 

Summaries the information by selecting amd reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.
The provided outlines demonstrate the
center
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of a given city named Islip as it is now with an expected advancement in the future.
It is clear that
the most significant change involves the addition of new housing in the
north eastern
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part of the town and next to the park.
Additionally
, downtown will be decided to be surrounded by a dual carriageway road. The main road is situated between shops approximately in the
center
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which is expected to
converted
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to pedestrians only. There are some shops on the top of the map that are planned to be demolished and
be
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replaced by
bus
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a bus
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station and a shopping
center
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with a parking lot. One part of
housing
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is located in the middle of the town
however
, it
is
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decided to be expanded and relocated to
left
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part, across from the school.
Finally
,
park
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the park
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and school will remain unchanged during the period of time.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • town center
  • main road
  • traditional layout
  • commercial areas
  • residential housing
  • rural land
  • urban development
  • dual carriageway
  • pedestrianized
  • bus-only areas
  • public transport
  • commercial infrastructure
  • shopping center
  • car park
  • bus station
  • residential housing
  • retain
  • expand
  • accessibility
  • commercial activity
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