You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. White at least 150 words.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

White at least 150 words.
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The pie charts illustrate the mean proportions in four types of meals:
sodium
, saturated fat, and added sugar, and
also
suggest that taking too much is unhealthy for the human body.
Overall
, the highest amount of
sodium
is taken at dinner, followed by saturated fat ,
whereas
added sugar is mostly taken during
snack
Fix the agreement mistake
snacks
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at 42%. The lowest amount of
sodium
could be seen in the snacks;
on the other hand
, breakfast is the time when a minimal amount of saturated fat and added sugar is consumed. For
sodium
, snacks and breakfast share the same percentage at 19%; at lunch, it is more than double that of snacks and breakfast.
However
, at dinner, almost two-fifths of the portion was
sodium
.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words sodium with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 3 times.
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