The pie charts below show the comparison of different kinds of energy production of France in two years.
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displayed
pie charts illustrate five different kinds of Verb problem
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energy
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production
sources from 1995 to 2005.
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Overall
, coal was the predominant fuel in both years. Linking Words
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while
all the other forms of power witnessed an increase, the demand for petrol declined noticeably.
In 1995, almost 60% of total Linking Words
energy
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production
was allocated to coal and gas. With a mere 1% growth in both power Use synonyms
production
stations, these two Use synonyms
energy
forms continued to dominate the Use synonyms
energy
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production
industry a decade later. Use synonyms
Moreover
, petrol was the third source of Linking Words
energy
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production
in 1995, making up for almost one-third of the Use synonyms
production
. Use synonyms
However
, by the end of the Linking Words
period
the Add a comma
period,
production
bottomed down to roughly one-fifth.
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Finally
, 6.40% of France's Linking Words
energy
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production
stemmed from nuclear Use synonyms
energy
at the beginning of the period, with a negligible increase Use synonyms
its
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in its
production
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reached
a tenth, Wrong verb form
reaching
While
other forms of Linking Words
energy
sources grew from a low of one-twenty to one-tenth of total Use synonyms
energy
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production
.Use synonyms
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "moreover, while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words energy, production with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
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