The pie charts below show the comparison of different kinds of energy production of France in two years.
The
displayed
pie charts illustrate five different kinds of Verb problem
apply
energy
production
sources from 1995 to 2005.
Overall
, coal was the predominant fuel in both years. Moreover
, while
all the other forms of power witnessed an increase, the demand for petrol declined noticeably.
In 1995, almost 60% of total energy
production
was allocated to coal and gas. With a mere 1% growth in both power production
stations, these two energy
forms continued to dominate the energy
production
industry a decade later. Moreover
, petrol was the third source of energy
production
in 1995, making up for almost one-third of the production
. However
, by the end of the period
the Add a comma
period,
production
bottomed down to roughly one-fifth.
Finally
, 6.40% of France's energy
production
stemmed from nuclear energy
at the beginning of the period, with a negligible increase its
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in its
production
reached
a tenth, Wrong verb form
reaching
While
other forms of energy
sources grew from a low of one-twenty to one-tenth of total energy
production
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