The chart below shows three different crimes and the number of cases committed between 1970 and 2005 in England and Wales. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The provided line graph compares the proportion of the three different types of crimes from 1970 to 2005 in England and Wales. It is evident that all cases had the same upward trends.

According to

the chart, the number of car thefts was 0.4 in 1970, two times more than house burglaries, the car robbery had a steady increase by 1990 but experienced a dramatic growth and had a peak at 1.6 million.

However

, it fell to 1 million by 2005.

Next,

in the house burgling report, we can see that it had the same pattern as car theft by 1980, but it fluctuated by 1995 and

then

started to drop to 0.3 million by 2005.

In contrast

, street robbery reports remained stable by 1995 and it had a slight rise by 2000 and stood at 0.2 by 2005.

Overall

, reported cases of vehicle theft were the maximum and street robbery the minimum throughout the given period of time.

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