The graph below gives information about the percentage of population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with prediction for 2030 and 2040. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and making comparison where relevant
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The aim of
this
report is to analyse Asian countries
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country's
countries'
population
in cities statistics between 1970 and 2020 with predictions for next
20 years and provide a summary.
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the next
Overall
as it
can be clearly seen from the graph all the Correct pronoun usage
apply
countries
experienced a growth of inhabitants. Malaysia holds the highest points most
of the mentioned period. Starting in 1970 only Change preposition
for most
Philippines
exceeded Malaysia's city Correct article usage
the Philippines
residants
but the percentage is almost insignificant. The same thing repeats 20 years laterCorrect your spelling
residents
,
when the Remove the comma
apply
population
of the Philippines
jumped by nearly a
half of Correct article usage
apply
last
year's records. However
in the period between 1990 and Add a comma
However,
2010
the Add a comma
2010,
country
lost over 10% of its citizens. During this
time, Malaysia’s population
rocketed and by 2020 reached the
first place, surpassing the next Correct article usage
apply
country
by almost a third. That country
is Indonesia. With four times more citizens than in 1970, in 2010 it’s
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its
population
surpassed the Philippines
and kept on increasing. The steadiest growth of population
happened in Thailand between 1990 and 2020. Comparing all of these graphs, it is clear that
Malaysia has the most residents and probably will in the future. Also
the smallest Add a comma
Also,
country
by its inhabitants is Thailand, now having just above half of Malaysia’s number. In the future
only Thailand and Add a comma
future,
Philippines
will grow Correct article usage
the Philippines
fastly
and other Rephrase
fast
countries
are believed to have a more stable population
size.
Generally, in the last
50 years Asian region is
getting larger by its citizens, Wrong verb form
has been
however
some Add a comma
however,
countries
like the Philippines
have experienced decline
. From the year 2000 Add an article
a decline
overall
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the overall
population
is
growing Wrong verb form
has been
fastly
.Rephrase
fast
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