The charts below give information on the ages of the populations of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.
the pie chart
,
illustrates population growth in three different Remove the comma
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ages category
from 2000 and it predicts the Fix the agreement mistake
age categories
populance
in 2050 in Yemen and Italy.
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population
overall
, the chart clarifies that youth and adults allocated the largest proportion of the population to themselves in both countries and years. while
, children under 14, placed in second
highest percentage in Yemen, Add an article
the second
however
it is in Add the comma(s)
however,
the
third place in Italy.
As we can see, the number of young people in Yemen will see a decrease from almost half to just over a third per cent. Correct article usage
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meanwhile
the number of old Add a comma
meanwhile,
indivituals
living in Correct your spelling
individuals
this
country will not experience a significant change.
still, adults, who has
been living in Italy, Change the verb form
have
is
going to have a dramatic Correct subject-verb agreement
are
grow
by 15 per cent. Replace the word
growth
however
the children still Add a comma
however,
takes
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take
last
place to almost one in ten per cent in 2050.Submitted by parmida.kharazi on
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