You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The charts below compare the age structure of the populations of France and India in 1984. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 word

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The charts below compare the age structure of the populations of France and India in 1984. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 word
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The chart provides information on the demography of France and India in 1984. The data clearly illustrate the advantage of India in the number of born children. In the case of France, the number of males and females has been relatively constant in the age groups from 0-5 to 30-35 at the level of 4 per cent each.
After
this
, a slight fall has been noticeable to 6%
overall
in the age of 40-45 years.
Subsequently
, despite a gradual growth to 7% in the group 50-55, a
further
descent has been witnessed to 2% females and only 0.5% males in the group
of
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85 or older.
In contrast
, India followed a different pattern as their age structure has the shape of a pyramid. In 1984 there were 7% of kids of both sexes aged 0-5. Since
then
, a moderate decrease is observed throughout older groups till 65-70 as each sex constitutes only 1% of society.
Then
, the
last
group
that is
presented is people above 70 who are responsible for 4% of both males and females.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Population distribution
  • Age structure
  • Pyramid shape
  • Elderly population
  • Birth rate
  • Life expectancy
  • Healthcare quality
  • Working-age population
  • Gender distribution
  • Age brackets
  • Age dependency ratio
  • Absolute numbers
  • Substantial number
  • Broad base
  • Balanced
  • Tilted in favor
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