An old friend of yours is coming to visit your city. You had planned to meet him at the airport, but something has come up and you will not be able to make it there on time. Write to your friend, In your letter Explain the situation Offer to make alterntive arrangements.

Dear Rahul I hope
this
letter finds you well and hope you are in good health and in high spirits. As you know I was coming to pick at the airport on the 10th of March.Suddenly, my manager
plan
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the group meeting on that day.
Apart from
this
, my nephew is
also
coming that day and so he will stay with me for
two
days
.Sadly,I will
be no
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available to welcome you and not be able to meet you for
two
days
.
Therefore
, I am sending my friend
shiv
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Shiv
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he will pick you
at
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the airport and you will accompany him for
two
days
after that I will join you and we will stay together and enjoy
at
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ourselves at
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my home. I hope you understand my situation and feel positive about the re-arrangement .
Besides
this
, I have
note
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down a few places where we spend our day and
last
but not least I Have already bought movie tickets for next week. Looking forward to hearing from you and
hoping
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you have a wonderful stay with my friend for
two
days
.
In addition
to
this
. when you reach
at
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the airport please text me. With love Navdeep
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organization
Try to use paragraphs to separate different ideas clearly. For instance, dedicate one paragraph to explaining the situation and another for the arrangements.
grammar
Ensure to check for grammatical errors to improve clarity and precision, such as using the correct verb forms and punctuation.
tone
Your tone is friendly and suitable for writing to a friend, which makes the communication feel welcoming and personal.
task completion
You have addressed the main points of the task by explaining the situation and offering alternative arrangements.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

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